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Upon the train I fell to haste,
So tempted me and took embrace,
Could I not love you one more way?
The next day then you fell away,
I'd betrayed us all,
But never had you warned me

And then you went and threw away,
The will to wait for that sunny day,
Still i've had to keep that smile,
Waiting for you all the while,
And I was but the haunter

No love lost then,
No love lost now,
A smile still creased upon my brow,
But faded and changed upon my lips,
The flesh that burned for that kiss,
I still burn though the flesh does not

No, you never forgave what I did to you,
I wonder now, can I forgive you?
You fade from me and my good graces,
Though still remain upon my sight,
Now I am but the haunted
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I wrote this piece this morning in a sudden urge to write. I quite like it.. It's intended as a spoken piece I think. It reminds me of something else.. But I can't place my finger on it.

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Could you?
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If a law is unjust, a man is not only right to disobey it, he is obligated to do so. – Thomas Jefferson

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I think not So not SO WOP WOP WOP WOPING COUGH
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I am pretty confused right now.

--
If a law is unjust, a man is not only right to disobey it, he is obligated to do so. – Thomas Jefferson

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:iconman-peeves:
Alrighty then.

--
If a law is unjust, a man is not only right to disobey it, he is obligated to do so. – Thomas Jefferson

The condom army: [link]
:iconman-peeves:
Indeed it was some thing on the forums that was about promoting safe-sex if I recall, but since has been finished with, I still keep it 'cause I think it's a cool avatar.

--
If a law is unjust, a man is not only right to disobey it, he is obligated to do so. – Thomas Jefferson

The condom army: [link]

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